W10 CAL final

W10 CAL final

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Needs further development is more analysis and support from the literature. It is important to show good understanding and reflections of the literature throughout your writing. Add Introduction, heading and subheading and Conclusion. Year 2000 and up citation and references. Adding a few practical examples or cases within the literature will help your analysis be more practical.

You start your CAL report in your introduction where you are addressing the importance of your workplace problem, which is addressing workplace problems. Although you give a n interesting background and you are emphasizing the importance of the problem using references to the literature, it would be nice to associate the problem also more explicitly to your workplace environment.
What is special in your workplace environment that made you select this problem?
In the next section you continue identifying examples and situations that result in problems for managers in their everyday work.
You then discuss the importance and give general guidelines on how to address the issues.
On the positive site is that you have used several references to support your arguments.
You are using your own words to present your ideas and you integrate and prioritize the presented issues in a natural and smooth manner.
On the negative site, is that you remain too general and you do not explicitly associate this process to the knowledge creation process in a more detailed manner.
Some information as for example what paradigm you adopted in order to address the problem, and how you as a manager have experienced these workplace problem, would have improved the quality of your work.